Source-based assessment
LAUNCH Humanities · Autumn 1 · Week 7 · 40 minutes
Today at a Glance
◆ Supported
Your answer and two errors marked, scribing permitted.
▲ Standard
Your answer and all four with criteria and repairs.
★ Stretch
All four with repairs, ranked by cost, and your own first fix.
Teacher Print Tools — Week 7
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
Arrival Task – Retrieving what the criteria ask
Four criteria: point stated, evidence quoted with origin, evidence explained, judgement reached.
Explaining means saying what the evidence shows, not repeating it in other words.
Arrival decision: Take the assessment paper and the criteria strip. Everyone works from the same two.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
Starter: A marked answer with four errors in it
One answer, marked as though it met every criterion.
Marker note: “All four met. Full marks.”
Your job: the note is wrong. Four criteria are unmet, and each one is visible on the page.
You are not marking a person. The answer is written for this lesson and it is nobody work, which is why we can be direct about it.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
I Do: Reading an answer against the criteria
The diagram lists the four criteria down the left and, on the right, the commonest way each one is missed.
Modelled: criterion two. I find a quotation and look for its origin. There is none. Error found. Smallest repair: eight words naming who wrote it and when. The paragraph does not need rewriting.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
We Do: Spot the error: four of them are planted
Paragraph 1: which criterion does it miss, and what is the smallest repair?
The quotation in paragraph 2: what is missing before it can count?
The final paragraph: is that a judgement, or a summary?
Spot first: spot the error and mark it on your copy with the criterion number, then correct the line in the margin. Everyone commits at the same time, then we hold up the copies together and compare.
Evidence check
We may not all find the same four. When we compare, we ask which criterion the marked line fails. A mark with a criterion behind it stands.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
I Do: What each error costs
The picture separates errors that cost a phrase from errors that cost a paragraph.
An answer with three cheap errors is usually closer to the standard than one with a single expensive one.
Ranked together: the missing origin is cheap. The missing judgement is expensive, because nothing in the answer can be reused to build it.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
We Do: Which error costs most to repair?
Everyone writes a ranking on a whiteboard, then we hold them up at the same time.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
Independent Work — Your record: the paper and the marking
Your record is your own answer plus your marking of the planted one. Both are assessed.
◆ Supported
Your answer, and two errors marked with criterion numbers. Scribing permitted.
▲ Standard
Your answer, all four errors marked with criteria and repairs.
★ Stretch
Your answer, all four with repairs, ranked by cost, and the one you would fix first in your own paper.
Check yourself: is every repair the smallest one that would meet the criterion?
Check yourself: did you check your own answer against the same four criteria?
⏸ Pens down — quick partner check!
Half way through: stop, swap with a partner, and check one thing on the list above together. Then carry on.
WAGOLL — what a good one looks like
A finished mark: paragraph two, criterion two unmet, the quotation carries no origin. Smallest repair: name the writer and the year, eight words, no rewriting. Cost: cheap.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
Lundy Loop — Your Voice in This Lesson
🚪 SPACE
Space ,
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
📣 VOICE
👥 AUDIENCE
⭐ INFLUENCE
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.
Exit Ticket — Audience receives; influence changes something
Read one of your marks to a partner. They say back which criterion you meant.
Did they name a different criterion? Change the wording of your mark. That change is your influence.
✅ Complete
Hand in your record and tick the learner confirmation on your sheet. That is the lesson done.
SPACE stays available, VOICE is received, AUDIENCE names back exactly and INFLUENCE changes one real next action.