| Annotation Stage | What goes in it |
|---|---|
| 1. STATE | Artist · Title · Medium · Date |
| 2. DESCRIBE | Foreground / mid / background. Objects. Colour, tone, line, scale. Juxtaposition. |
| 3. EXPLAIN | What the artist means. Your reaction. Link to ideas (Freud / dreams / subconscious). |
| Gridding step | Action |
|---|---|
| 1 | Grid the printed image (2cm × 2cm) |
| 2 | Grid your sketchbook page (same number of squares) |
| 3 | Copy box-by-box, NOT freehand |
| 4 | Add tone — pencil, watercolour, or coloured pencil |
| Keyword | Meaning |
|---|---|
| Juxtaposition | Two unrelated things side by side |
| Subconscious | Mind below conscious awareness |
| Renaissance | Classical revival — Dalí's later style |
| Dreamscape | Landscape that resembles a dream |
Tick what you've already got:
☐ A title ☐ 5 facts about Dalí ☐ 1 image stuck in ☐ Anything written about it
Today's focus: the gridded drawing.
Notes:
Tick what you've got:
☐ Title + 6 facts in own words ☐ 2+ images with titles ☐ REACT response ☐ Juxtaposition explained ☐ Comparison sentence to Miró
Today's focus: study + annotation.
Notes:
Tick what you've got:
☐ Creative title + 8+ facts in context ☐ 3 images with mini-analysis ☐ Three-way comparison ☐ Subconscious / Freud connection ☐ "Connection to my work" line
Today's focus: high-quality study + sophisticated annotation linking technique to meaning.
Notes:
| Route | Plan |
|---|---|
| A — Research finished | Straight into the study + annotation |
| B — Research nearly done | 5 min finish facts/REACT, then grid + draw. Annotation possibly homework. |
| C — Miró still unfinished | Finish Miró first (10 min), then start Foundation Dalí research. Study slips to next lesson. |
| Stage | Includes | Example phrase |
|---|---|---|
| 1. STATE | Artist, title, medium, date | "Painted by Dalí in 1944, oil on panel." |
| 2. DESCRIBE | Objects, layout, colour, tone, juxtaposition | "In the background, an elephant on long stilt-legs." |
| 3. EXPLAIN | Meaning, your reaction, link to ideas | "This feels like a chaotic dream — Dalí is showing the subconscious." |
STATE: This painting is by Salvador Dalí. It is called Dream Caused by the Flight of a Bee around a Pomegranate a Second before Waking. It is an oil painting on panel, painted in 1944.
DESCRIBE: In the background there is an elephant with absurdly long stilt-legs carrying a large rock-like crystal. In the mid-ground we see two tigers leaping from one another, and from a fish which itself leaps from a pomegranate. In front of the leaping tiger a rifle points at an unclothed reclining woman. Many juxtapositions: bizarre imagery against the relaxed pose of the woman, calm against tiger-aggression. Dalí emphasises warm colour and tone for a Renaissance feel.
EXPLAIN: This piece feels chaotic and dreamlike. Dalí is showing the woman's subconscious mind — the bee, rifle, tigers may be dream-images at the moment of waking. The realistic detail makes the impossible believable, which makes me feel uneasy. Links to Dalí's interest in Freud's writings on dreams.
1️⃣ STATE. The artist is _____. The work is called _____, painted in _____.
2️⃣ DESCRIBE. In the foreground I can see _____. There is a juxtaposition between _____ and _____.
3️⃣ EXPLAIN. This makes me feel _____. I think Dalí is showing _____. It links to Freud's idea of _____.
"This painting by Dalí is called The Persistence of Memory. It is a watercolour painted in 2004. In the painting I can see lots of weird stuff — an elephant with long legs, some tigers and a pomegranate. Dalí used bright primary colours like Miró did. The work is just weird and I don't really get it. I think it's lazy because anyone could paint random things."
Find 3 mistakes:
1. ____________________________________
2. ____________________________________
3. ____________________________________
Writing frame template:
This painting is by ___________. It is called ___________. It is painted in ___________. It was made in ___________.
In the picture I can see ___________.
This makes me feel ___________ because ___________.
"In the foreground there is _____, in the mid-ground _____, in the background _____."
"There is a juxtaposition between _____ and _____."
"I think Dalí is exploring _____ because _____."
Key terms to weave in: juxtaposition, subconscious, Freud, dreamscape, Renaissance brushwork, tonal contrast, scale distortion, symbolic, naturalistic, hyper-realism
Aim: link technique to meaning in EXPLAIN. Add one comparison line to Magritte or Miró.
☐ Pick a simpler Dalí image ☐ Grid 2cm×2cm ☐ Copy box-by-box ☐ Add basic tone ☐ Write STATE on the writing frame
☐ Pick a Dalí image ☐ Grid + accurate copy ☐ Add tone ☐ Write STATE + DESCRIBE ☐ Use the keyword juxtaposition
☐ Pick a complex image ☐ Detailed gridded study with developed tone ☐ Full STATE + DESCRIBE + EXPLAIN ☐ Weave juxtaposition / subconscious / Freud ☐ One comparison line
1) What are the 3 stages of the writing frame?
2) Why do we use a grid?
3) Name one thing in the STATE part of an annotation.
1) What goes into each stage — STATE, DESCRIBE, EXPLAIN?
2) Why must Dalí annotations mention the SUBCONSCIOUS?
3) Give an example of a juxtaposition in the Bee painting.
1) Why must STATE come before DESCRIBE before EXPLAIN — does order matter?
2) How does gridding help — and what does it NOT teach?
3) Should artists always link technique to meaning? Argue.